Massive fail

[pez]

is when you stare at 6000 words you've written and think, "this needs a re-write."

*sigh*

Comments

[crystalusagi.livejournal.com]

...that happens quite a lot to me. *petpet*

But it seems from your other post you're almost finished with it, ne? =D

[yuki-scorpio.livejournal.com]

The ending is currently fighting back very hard.

And once it's done, there will be extremely heavy editing required...

[crystalusagi.livejournal.com]

Show it who's boss!

Someone can help you beta-read it. The hard part is getting it all out, I think.