I just posted the final chapter and I wibble coz I'm so scared of what people think about the ending

[pez]

Do not click on the LJ-cut unless you have read the final chapter of [The City]


DAN TAICHI PWNS THEM ALL.

(Crys, see why I kept saying I would not kill Dan? XD)

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[forochel.livejournal.com]

...

*laughs*

[yuki-scorpio.livejournal.com]

It's only the truth 8D

[giving-ground.livejournal.com]

XD that final section just made me laugh (in a good way)... kind of all the tension releasing at once. <3

[tokkitsu.livejournal.com]

XDDDD That was so brill, really.

[love_archived]

*laugh*

Better than Yukimura, even, I'll bet. Oh Dan. ^_^

[yuki-scorpio.livejournal.com]

*snicker* Yeah, I was grinning to myself writing it...

[yuki-scorpio.livejournal.com]

Smiling to himself, Dan pockets the device.

It might come in useful one day.

"I pwn." He says.



*shot*

[yuki-scorpio.livejournal.com]

When he grows up he'll probably be the next Yukimura for Rithonia XDDDDD

[factorielle.livejournal.com]

YES HE DOES.

Okay. All 28 chapters in one day is a bit too much for me. I am now dead from the emotional rollercoaster.

That was fucking brilliant, Pez. :)

[yuki-scorpio.livejournal.com]

OH MY GOD?!?!!?! YOU READ IT ALL IN ONE GO TODAY?!?!!? *_*

(I was soooo totally going "BUT DAN PWNS!!!" when we were talking about Dan vs Chopper, but I couldn't give it away at that point XD)


WHEEEEE ♥!!!!!

[factorielle.livejournal.com]

Yup. ^_^ Had to print it all in dark green because of course the printer had to run out of black ink today of all days, but it was such a good read in the subway that I almost missed my station. >_>

Dan pwns indeed. GO DAN!!!

Also, I'm very glad that I didn't start reading it before it was over. :p While you don't rely on the cliffhanger trick, it would still have been horrible to wait every time.

[yuki-scorpio.livejournal.com]

Printed it all out? O_O How many pages was that? (when I had it all in MSWord, it was about 100 pages or so x_x) You crazy, crazy woman ♥

XD Oh man, I was frustrated at myself for writing so slowly, sometimes. (although the last week or two @_@ must've been the highest fic output for me ever)

[fic-faery.livejournal.com]

Yukimura will kill him eventually. Probably as part of his next big plot to make himself even more god like.

[factorielle.livejournal.com]

D00d, read all that in one go on the computer screen and kiss my eyes goodbye. Plus Narnia bores me out of my mind so I needed something to read on the train, and so it was the perfect solution. It came down to... 135 pages? Printing 4 pages/sheet it was quite manageable really. XD