Rikkai ficcage
Sep. 26th, 2005 11:42 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
pezAnybody who likes Rikkai (or anyone who's got a minute to spare - you don't need to know PoT), check this out and tell me what you think? <_< >_> If there are phrases that you like or doesn't make sense, bits that don't read well, grammar problems (ouch) and such?
(coz it's been a week and I can't tell if it's suckage or not with such little response, and one never improves when there's no feedback)
(and if you like YukiYanaYuki, try this too: [Stop Trying] )
(coz it's been a week and I can't tell if it's suckage or not with such little response, and one never improves when there's no feedback)
(and if you like YukiYanaYuki, try this too: [Stop Trying] )
