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[pez]

Neither of my computers are good enough to play most of the newer games on the market. Which is probably a Very Good Thing.

I took another stab at [The City] today. I understand that not every chapter can be full of heart-stopping suspense or beautiful imageries, but I read back what I've written and have that "so what?" feeling. But I'll keep doing it. Today yet another plot twist came to mind, but it really will make things too complicated, and I'll get bricks thrown at me if I write it that way, I think. So for the sake of my mental and physical health, I'm taming that twist down into just a possibility. Some characters may start to think "Could it be [idea of twist]? No, that's not possible... right?", and that's all.

Anyway, I'll keep writing, and then go back and deface, tear apart, and stab it (the process otherwise known as editing) later. It's strange, back when I wrote Weiß Kreuz, I did almost no editing at all. With PoT I'm doing more and more of it, although I don't see my writing becoming any better as a result. =_= The fact remains that [Little Prince], my first PoT fic, is still the one people like the best. I'm not getting anywhere, am I?

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[schuldich-sunde.livejournal.com]

Actually to be honest, I would have to say that I liked your Weiss Kreuz fanfiction better. I was a rabid fan of Weiss until about a year ago when the fandom kinda just flopped and died from the smell of really BAD fanfiction. So now I'm a rabid fan of PoT. XD So I've basically read all the fanfiction you've posted on the internet ^_^ (is a fan *waves flag*) Anyways, for some reason I get more emotion from the WK fics, especially in Blinded. I honestly LOVE that fic. (And I wish you could finish it XD XD). You just make the WK characters come alive, especially Schwarz. Everything you wrote just played with the reader's heartstrings. With PoT, while your writing is still very good, there's just not that intensity of emotion that I got from WK. I don't know what it is, maybe the fandom itself or me? But somehow, I just feel that PoT doesn't have the same level of angsty goodness...heh ^_^' NOT that it's an insult, because by God, your writing is wonderful and I really do love reading it. So I'll keep reading (and commenting when I remember *scratches head*) and twiddling my thumbs for the next chapter of Blinded. <-- still hasn't lost hope yet.