Urgh, people

[pez]

RPG ads these days. Do people who write them never read their own writing out loud? It's a great way to get a real feel of how well/crap you've done. I read this one out loud just now and Liz was pulling faces by the second paragraph.

So many RPG ads read like the back of vanity-published books, or just a really really bad book you'd not pay for if you came across it at a shop. Urgh.

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[eolo.livejournal.com]

It's pretty common for Japanese to name something with a foreign name to give it more appeal (Clé de Peau by Shiseido hint hint), when Westerners do it it's downright laughable.

"Accardi, because it doesn't mean anything, it makes it that more mysterious."