Revealed~

[pez]

My rikkai_exchange entries were [Song of the Bamboo Forest] (NC17) and [Misled] (PG).

[Song of the Bamboo Forest] was very geared towards the recipient (who dropped out, woe), not just in terms of pairing and AU-ness, but the whole approach too. It's quite like [The City] in the way that it's showing, rather than telling. Showing how someone felt by describing his actions, rather than writing paragraphs on how he actually felt. But yeah, it's not everybody's cup of tea.

[Misled] - I only liked the concept of the story, but not the outcome. If I had a bit more time to play with it in my head, maybe it could've been better. *sigh*


No more exchanges. NO MORE.

Comments

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I think you did an excellent job with the showing, if that's what your aim was. It can be hard to do that, although the fic was really fluid and seamless and not forced at all (ie. instead of having more "telling").