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My red Roger Federer t-shirt arrived just now! \(^0^)/ I was going to link to it again, but it seems like it really was limited edition - they aren't selling anymore on the site.

And Kane-chan approves of it! d(^_^)b Or maybe he doesn't care, but I just want to use this icon. So for the sake of this post, he approves!

Actually, I think he looks more like this in the icon: d(:D)b

XD;;;;; Oh, the silly man.

This post is for spamming! Come on, where is the spam gone? What does a Pez have to do to receive spam? Should she balance a pepper shaker on her (not bleeding!) nose?

[edit] I GOT FLIGHT TICKETS! GONNA GO SELL MORE JUNK NOW. MWAHAHAHAHA.

Current Mood: cheerful

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From:

giving-ground.livejournal.com

If I could write fic I would be less fail. ;;

Can you put it in such a way that the reader would be able to make sense of the statement in context, without having it spelt out? That would be the ideal situation, I think. Otherwise, a few small endnotes or something won't kill people, though as a reader I'd rather they be kept to an absolute minimum. In general though, if I can see a good reason for something to be there then it's good. You should be wary of throwing in far too much irrelevant detail just to show that you know things. Not that I think you'd do that at all, really, but sometimes you see people writing historical fic or whatever and it's just like they've tried to shove their entire knowledge of whatever place/period it is into a story for no damn good reason rather than picking and choosing to get what's most relevant.

...spot the pet peeve. :D But a few bits and pieces here and there should be fine, I think. :)

From:

yuki-scorpio.livejournal.com

Then go and unfail. 8D You just have to keep trying until you unfail, dude.

That's what I'm thinking. I'm trying really hard to make it all "invisible" and more "show rather than tell" but there are incidences where it just doesn't seem to work. Am thinking about taking out those little bits altogether since it's not essential. Gah, I dunno. Should I just show you the fic? XD;